The Flight

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Life’s agonies can be so profound
That might burn you in Inferno’s hall.
Lift yourself above the ground,
Every time from a deep fall.

You are a mythical Phoenix ,in disguise
Resurrect yourself from the ashes
Transform yourself from the clouds, so dense!
Reigniting your fire, giving off flashes.

Your past can haunt you in testing times,
Wear equanimity and hold your intrpid strings.
Raise your head to see the light, so sublime,
And take a flight by burning your wings.

The flight to the future from Karmic present,
The flight of persevere life, so meant.

P.S.-Tried to create this sonnet with a rhyming pattern of ababcdcdefefgg.
In response to writing201:Poetry.

© 2015 Piyush Singh

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15 thoughts on “The Flight

  1. Juliet Qoey February 28, 2015 / 9:50 am

    Nicely done 🙂

  2. Ameena k.g February 28, 2015 / 11:00 am

    Really wonderful choice of words! I love the theme behind it of rising after fall and flying despite burns 😉

    • singhpiyush6089 February 28, 2015 / 12:54 pm

      Yeah You got exactly right! Thanks a lot for reading!

  3. kathyclem February 28, 2015 / 2:33 pm

    Beautifully said: Take Flight!

  4. Noirfifre February 28, 2015 / 9:54 pm

    Another engaging piece again. I think you left off a letter in your one before the last word of the second line in the third stanza.

    • singhpiyush6089 February 28, 2015 / 10:21 pm

      Yeah technical fault! Thanks a lot for reading!

      • Noirfifre March 2, 2015 / 12:55 am

        I am fan, always oblige to read.

      • singhpiyush6089 March 2, 2015 / 5:00 am

        Oh !thank you! It gives me fuel to move!

  5. Sam Rappaz February 28, 2015 / 10:29 pm

    Well rhymed! I enjoyed your metaphors 🙂

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